Kia ora Tupou, my name is Ben and I’m a year eight at Paihia School. You look like you put a lot of effort into it and I admire that, I didn’t realize that’s how much lions weighed. Lions are one of my favourite animals. Where about in India is India’s Gir Forest? Goodbye.
Hello Tupou my name is Zane and I am a year 7 student at Paihia School. I really liked your post about facts about lions because it helped me learn more about lions. I learnt what size a lion is. I really liked the way you did a slideshow because a poster is much harder to understand. To improve next time you could maybe explain what you were learning about so that the reader is more interested in your blog post for example if it's just boring everyday words the reader might just go to another blog post. What fact did you not know?
Kia ora Tupou, my name is Ben and I’m a year eight at Paihia School. You look like you put a lot of effort into it and I admire that, I didn’t realize that’s how much lions weighed. Lions are one of my favourite animals. Where about in India is India’s Gir Forest? Goodbye.
ReplyDeleteHello Tupou my name is Zane and I am a year 7 student at Paihia School. I really liked your post about facts about lions because it helped me learn more about lions. I learnt what size a lion is. I really liked the way you did a slideshow because a poster is much harder to understand. To improve next time you could maybe explain what you were learning about so that the reader is more interested in your blog post for example if it's just boring everyday words the reader might just go to another blog post. What fact did you not know?
ReplyDeleteHi Tupou that gave me a lot of information about lions
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