In my story today i interviewed my aunty and asked her about her experience in Queenstown and what she enjoyed the most and she said the best part of it all is that she got to bungy jump in Kawarau river bridge which i found really exciting. It was her first time trying it out and i think its really amazing knowing that she was able to try it out and maybe next time i could give it a go. When i saw this photo of her it looked really scary as she was jumping off something really high and looking at how far it is made me nervous but at the end it was the best experience for her and it made me feel like i was there myself and i find that awesome.
Malo e lelei Tupou. What a great idea interviewing your Aunt to find out what a bungy jump is actually like. She is one brave lady! I liked how you used some wow words to share how you felt when hearing about her jump, like exciting, amazing, scary, nervous. This helps your reader imagine what it was like to do a bungy jump. Teacher Tip: Use a paragraph for each new idea. (Push/click the enter key before starting/writing the next idea.) This will help make your writing easier to understand. I am looking forward to reading your next story.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tupou my name is Reminis and I go to Paihia School, and I am a year seven student. I really like your post about the bungy jumping because you put on a picture of someone jumping off. I have never done that before because I get butterflies when I jump off things. Do you know one of your friends that has jumped off before?
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